Twisted Intentionality

Irreverent bent of hostility

Crept across the floor

Roaching around the floorboards

Weeviling into my ego

Biting the time it takes

To relent

To your twisted

Intentionality

 

Why

 Tell me

Why

Can’t you

Just

Leave

Me

Be

 

You m**********r

Destructive taker

You leave the

Bodies

In your wake

And when you’re

Done

There’s nothing

Left

Nothing left

To undertake

 

Mean

Mean

You think it’s me

That put you

In your grave?

Laughs

Laughs

A million

Laughs

It was

You

Who drove the

Stake

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Made me think of a story of a couple of love crossed lovers that can never be because the destruction they create when together would end the world that both know. The pain of their hearts consumes them to the point they can not think of anything but each other. Lying to themselves that it could be different this time. But knowing only death awaits them.


Great Job!!!!!!!

[she makes me weird]

Great piece. Powerful words. I like the shape the lines of words make...like a stake. Very creative and well written piece.

[Angel's Lady]

Wow. Very powerful, old friend! Very dynamically written, as is all of your work...Great job!

Very dark and good! I like the flow and structure. Great poem!

[The Elder Pine]

This reminds me of the Metallica song Master of puppets in a way. I think I have experienced something like this as well. I think this is your most angry piece do date. It is very good and your style is really great.

[Jerri]

Wow....dark and twisted...I like it~