Night Mares Road Hard

Night

Mares

Road hard

Fear stained flight

Pounding

Pounding

Choking

Screaming

Sin

Raw-boned

Bitter tea

Must get

Away

From him

Jailer

Jailer

Retched Beast

Drew the knife

Perfect slice

Took her life

Razor thin

Escape makes

A mystery

Out of me

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Hmm. I reviewed this piece but it seems to have disappeared on me.

This speaks of a soul or person trying to find reason and justification in a sense. Looking for a release but it also speaks of courage seeing the damning nature of a relationship and knowing it will eventually consume the very core of their being. To often people are to blind to see such things feeling it just the nature of such things. But here you speak of wisdom that is seen and learned to be a fact.


Great Job!!!!!!!

[Emily B]

You'll never believe this . . . I started reading your words and thought immediately of Robert Luna. I'm always thinking of th eperson I have to share something with and this called his name. And there he was--the featured Reviewer!

Great write!

[Jerri]

Escape from abuse....very poignant and strong.

[The Elder Pine]

Is this in any way about murder or abuse? I like your style, the short lines that flow in a sort of tree like structure. This piece is full of images and feeling, very powerful. Thank you for sending it to me.