Distinguished Gentleman

Distinguished he was

Often was said

Just before he went to bed

With a different woman than the night before

Although never one to go with a w***e

Distinguished he was

With his little grin

And the graying stubble on his chin

But once with a woman for the first go

New from the last night don’t you know

Things became undone rather quickly when

The lady of the night became most unkind

Finding the only thing little wasn’t just his grin

The gentleman was blessed with a far littler mind

Reviews

[The Elder Pine]

Well done and clever as always. I liked that you whent for the mind. Well painted and crafty. There are a few lines that really have a ring to them as well, the whole piece fits well. Thank you for sharing as always.

[No one]

Heh heh. Your last line rings true: The gentleman was blessed with a far littler mind

[J]

AWK!!! I laughed hysterically!! [still cackling like a fool, actually] ;-) And just when I thought we were going to get an inside anatomy lesson ......... Yikes! I had to wash out my mind.

Very clever writing, Lucinda! Enjoyed this!

j

[Emily B]

aw, poor old George. And you didn't go there--you went for his mind. Good stuff!

[Brandon]

Nicely written, good job on this one.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

well isnt that the truth about so many... fantastic piece of writing!

[THE BLACK SEAL]

I think it is very good. I do think you could expound upon it more and embellish it. thats just me though good write

[Robert Luna]

LOL. Very creative "little" twist. You always leave me so pleased when I read your words. I enjoyed this and I am going to pass this on to a few others i feel will get a kick out of it as well.



Great Job!!!!!!

[OceanTropic]

HAH!!! I LOVE IT!!!

Yes yes, the gentlemen who fill their bed only with those who have not visited before, and unlike certain small things, their minds seem to be less. I LOVED this. Definately going into my favorites.