Waste of Your State

Maladjusted and busted by the ways of your world

Hate unfurled with the stench of your flag

You propagate a supposed similitude of justice

Wholly corrupted by the waste of your State

Oh, the hate you create by the lies that you state

Barefaced and blinded by your rhetoric of destruction

Construction of your kingdom destined to doom

The masses so passively dance to your tune

Altogether unjustified, this will not end soon

Reviews

[The Rose That Grew From..]

This is cool.
I think the war is bad too bring the troops home

[Robert Luna]

I really loved this piece and it shall be joining my favorites. The images that it paints in my mind's eye is both wonderful and hypnotic. This gave me such wonderful ideas for a new piece. I always love being inspired by someone else's words.


Great Job!!!!!!

[E. M. Murren]

This is a powerful rant. You have chosen your subject well. This is a wonderful work. Many cheers.

[The Elder Pine]

Very well done, your venom pieces are always highly charged. I think it reflects how this country is today.

[Levi]

Wow I think I could read this and enjoy it if it were 20 pages long! Great word use. It is all so true. Everybody seems to be blinded by something, whatever the case may be. Glad to see you are someone who knows to question and not just fall blindly in line with everyone else!