Suicide Note

From the looks of things

You probably know

This is my last dispatch

 

Well

 

This side of hell

 

Sorry for the smudges

One last mess I failed to fix

But don’t worry about this

I’ll be back

No worries ‘bout that

Author's Note

If I don't win the suicide contest with this submission I just don't know what I'm going to do....No pressure or anything on anybody....I'm sure I'll be fine...and forgive this bit of tongue in cheek irony...such a serious subject...I don't know how else to be....

Reviews

[The Elder Pine]

As do I. The irony is fine, nothing wrong with that. You once again show that you can put a large amount of meaning into a shorter piece. The experience of it seems very really and touches the reader deeply.

[Robert Luna]

I wish you tons of luck with you contest I think this was very interesting and original in the process of making me think wow that could be so real it is scary. Such words would leave any that read this wondering about the possibilities of the truthfulness of it.


Well DOne!!!!!

[Blackbirdsong]

Suicide contest? Just the title of that gives me chills. I hope you win/won...as I reading this I was like, "boy I hope this isn't for real." So if that means anything you're a winner. :)