In Response to Sacrifice

The following is my response to an incredible piece by High Road called "Sacrifice." I've included the link to the poem below.

 www.writerscafe.org/writing/bigfoot12_13/235926/

 

In Response to Sacrifice

 

 Injustice is burning

The times they are turning

Intimacy lost

So great a cost to bear

 

Not so says the jester

In response to the tester

My life is but mine alone

 

The seed she be planted

Your reign soon supplanted

And none will have nary a throne

Reviews

[E. M. Murren]

You do have an incredibly naturally lovely form. This is a wonderful work of independence. Like a poetic declaration. Fabulous work. Many cheers.

[Shadows of Sight]

As it stands alone. This is well writen and has a good ryhme to it! I like the jester and how it makes the images of the piece jump further out into my mind!
Great Work! :)

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This is really good. I think you are very talented!

[THE BLACK SEAL]

very nicely done

[thecoolone52]

i dont know what highroad wrote cause he or she BLOCKED ME but i enjoyed the poem the last few lines were my fav.... nice work

[The Elder Pine]

Ah a good poem indeed. I am so very glad that you were inspired by my words. You did such a good job with it. I love what your style and your added rhyme. You used it well, good write once more.