An Elephant Never Forgets

An elephant never forgets to sway

And dance and sing in the elephant way

 

 With a jiggle of his tubee trunk

He can snirt and squirt and huff and grunt

 

 With light soft steps across the sky

The elephant begins to fly

 

 And soar and roar in and through the clouds

Swooping and swimming among the boughs

 

 If even only in his elephant dreams

An elephant can grow his elegant wings

 

 An elephant never forgets to sway

And dance and sing in the elephant way

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Totally fun and whimsical! I really like the flow of this....Great job!

[THE BLACK SEAL]

lol fantastic

[Tally]

Great writing. I love shorter poems as I tend to get bored with the longer ones and eventually lose the plot. Liked this one a lot. At one point I thought it could be a 'jumbo' jet (excuse the pun!). Brilliant.

[Lea Jane]

This is a very cute poem, I loved it!

"If even only in his elephant dreams
An elephant can grow his elegant wings"

[The Elder Pine]

Yes I supose that is true. I think there is always a great deal of meaning to your pieces, or some sort of depth. Your word choice is good and everything fits just right. Thank you for sending me this piece.

[The Autumn Faerie]

I like the innocence conveyed in this piece.
It's very pure; it makes me feel lighter, happier, somehow.