Flowing "you"

Something new, I just thought about, tell me what you think

The flow of "you," your essence

Filling the pool of "me", my soul

Entering with such ease but

Keeping "you," is the trick

A spring in this desert of existence

Keeping me alive, and full

Never being thirsty again

Blinded by this tranquility, peace

The thought of it running out,

Never crossed my mind, not once

Shallow, idiotic to think it would last

But praying that "you" would continue to flow

But it dried up, with no hope of "you" returning

An oasis is what I am searching for now,

To once again fill this empty pool

Parched, dry, barron and no "you" in sight

Author's Note

Advice very much appreciated. Just trying some new things

Reviews

[lili]

Mais um poema muito bonito.