The Escape ~ Part One

Fictional Love Story

 

The Escape
Part One


I decided to take a trip
I wanted it to be a romantic place
I've never seen before.
An island you may say,
yes that will be my get away.
I wanted to go where
you see lovers holding hands
and being free to express them selves
and their true feelings.



The place I chose was Hawaii
so I started my journey off alone
to an island I would soon come to know,
yet did I know what would be waiting for me?
Filled with romance and passion even more
so when I walked off the plane to a paradise
I've never seen the beauty in it's awe
greeted by the most kindness of people.
Oh yes I felt at home like I never felt before
Is this my escape from a world I left behind?



One of the islanders name Joe
took me to a small island were lovers
were holding hands
as they walked along the beautiful ocean
feeling the sand between their toes
laughter in their voices
Oh how I wish it was me.



I went to my room to settle in
then out and about... I just couldn't stay in.
I took a walk on the beach, no shoes of course.
I too wanted to feel the sand between my toes.
I walked for a long time until I saw the sunset
going down in a blaze
Oh what beauty before me.



As I was walking back to my room
I noticed a man standing
in front of the ocean staring at the view.
He was tall tan and handsome
I felt sure he was an islander
I stopped and said hello.
When he looked into my eyes
I know my face was all a glow

To Be Continue

Original By
Diana Hall
September 2008

 

 

Page Design by
Donna DeLong Matthews



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Reviews

[Poets Soul]

A great start, on to part 2. :) PS

[Antony]

This is a great start to a romantic escapade, you are creating good imagery of the surroundings and your emotional feelings, looking for that romantic fling. I'm moving on to the next chapter.
Antony

[Michael X]

Quite sentimental, you did a great job creating the concept, as well as
executing the moment in time, the way your words have transporting effect.
I think escape really defines the story line. Beautifully written Diana

[Ray Hamilton]

Wonderful write
Can't wait to read more
This is just a teaser, --- Not fair LOL
Ray

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Sweetie this is so awesome. You have shown such great talent
here a talent you did not believe in Im so glad you decided to
join me here and share your beautiful heart with others.
I await part two.... S O O N !!!!!

Hugs and Love you bunches
KKD

[C. C. Burl]

Lovely and sweet and oh so beautiful. I really love it.
I like how it's written like a poem, even though you said it was a story; I was pleasantly surprised.
Tell me more, si vous plait!

[Aspiring Angel]

So beautiful my friend. I am in on the beginning of a great talent I can see. I can't wait until the next part comes around. Huggs, Lesa