My Bikini Days Are Over

My Bikini Days Are Over

A Poem by LA Lorena
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My traditional Saturday morning bit of fluff and nonsense. Re-posting for motivation for my upcoming trip to Mexico.

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Looking in my full length mirror,

bikini days are done I fear

What once were proud, hang too low

and cellulite now steals the show

My glory days have come to pass

too much bounce and too much a*s

Gravity is not my friend

I now fall out when stooped to bend

It's not as bad as in my mind

but to myself, I'm seldom kind

I'm not twentyfive and should be proud

I should strut my stuff, it's allowed

Insecurities I must face

I'll wear the suit and OWN the place!

Down to the beach in skimpy suit

I'll sashay and leave them mute

into the water I'll dive with ease

(I really am a horrid tease)

Freedom is mine, I shall not care

what you think of what I wear!

I can wear a two-piece, yes I can

and still turn heads on any man

Confidence brims, hear me roar

bikini days are here once more!

back to the shore I boldly walk

amidst those eyes and all that talk

now what is this? what's the trouble?

I look down, it bursts my bubble

a quiet hush now, I wish there weren't

bikini swept off by ocean current

 

My bikini days are over.....

 

 

 

 

© 2013 LA Lorena


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Well done. I liked how this came about and seems to pick up speed some how.



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Posted 12 Years Ago


yeah..speedos are not for me either

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Posted 12 Years Ago


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A delightful treatment of self appraisal that is almost brutal in its honesty. I loved it and the marvelous ability to laugh at oneself. Beyond that, it is presented in an appealing style with unforced rhymes that personally is a relief to see.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mmmmmmm your confidence is yummy I love a smile as I read it's something that you do .. You dialed my heart to Intrigue

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful ... diffrent ... I am looking for honest writing ... If thats true or not , thats I can not tell ... I will read your poetyr and back to my shell LOL.... I love it :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Hahaha soo love your honesty in this... and I'm sure you can still turn heads, I'm certain of it.

So nice to read you again.
:)


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Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved this piece! Witty and clever and universal!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this, it was fun to read and My bikini days has been gone! "LOL"

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Posted 13 Years Ago


What fun...! Lovely light touch and how you made me smile... and, btw, I love mature women... xxx

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Posted 13 Years Ago


That was quite comical and witty... thanks for the laugh... I don't think you bikini days are over... nothing wrong with too much a*s... skinny girls are not sexy... voluptuous is hot.

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LA Lorena
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