The Heels?

The Heels?

A Poem by LA Lorena

The Heels?

 

 

 

A simple elevation

not in status

but in stature and in spirit

 

they restore a long dormant

sway and movement to these idle hips

and rewind my mind

to once again remember

what it felt like to be a woman

 

 

Unless of course

you have a better way of reminding me

 

 

 

© 2013 LA Lorena


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You are, as I've asserted so many times, rather wholesome, the-girl-next-door. That is, if you happen to live in a red light district.
The "heels" are guys who would remind you you're a woman by asking you to parallel park. Not me, of course.
Very much enjoyed your poetic sashaying around in heels; it definitely managed to remind me I'm still a man.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

LMAO! You Sir, are a priceless gem.



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Ha, you are wickedly funny. Unless you come upon a real creep then they're always a good choice to smack someone over the head with. Just saying. ;-) Fun LA!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I'm supposed to be doing light & airy, you take over! ;-)
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

I have too many shoe poems already. I may just switch it up and do an ode to lace panties next.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

woooooooooooo, can't wait.
:-)

:-)

and

:-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed my semi-serious and semi-frivolous train of thought.
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

I did, manymegamuch :-)
LL naughty, naughty girl!
Nice, light piece describing something seemingly so ordinary in an extraordinary way.
You will have most of the guys lining up with suggestions lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

LOL! I'm really not half as naughty as one would think. I just own an active imagination is all. Tha.. read more

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LA Lorena
LA Lorena

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