The Heels?

The Heels?

 

 

 

A simple elevation

not in status

but in stature and in spirit

 

they restore a long dormant

sway and movement to these idle hips

and rewind my mind

to once again remember

what it felt like to be a woman

 

 

Unless of course

you have a better way of reminding me

 

 

 

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

You are, as I've asserted so many times, rather wholesome, the-girl-next-door. That is, if you happen to live in a red light district.
The "heels" are guys who would remind you you're a woman by asking you to parallel park. Not me, of course.
Very much enjoyed your poetic sashaying around in heels; it definitely managed to remind me I'm still a man.

[LA Lorena]

LMAO! You Sir, are a priceless gem.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Hahahaha! well pinned!!

[LA Lorena]

thanks. just one of my fun little writes. glad you got a laugh!

[quinfinn]

oh, you're just asking for it, aren't you? of course there are better ways. so thats why women love their shoes so much! sorry a*s men falling down on their "duties".

[LA Lorena]

I ask for nothing Quin, but I do so enjoy a good provoking every now and again. ;)

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! This is so true. Nothing makes you feel more feminine than strapping into some strappy, spiky shoes ;-) One question, though...wtf is "elevatation" ???

[LA Lorena]

Good eye. Elevatation is what we get when we post poems written when we are sick and suffering from lack of sleep! ;)

[LA Lorena]

Thanks for catching that! Proof positive that one can have too much T and A. ;)

[KAOlmsted]

XD I actually Googled it after I posted that and found a burger joint in California... My pleasure.

[Perri]

A lot of women have issues walking in heels. These women are particularly fascinating, if hilarious, to watch :L
Yay for sexual references!

[LA Lorena]

practice makes perfect! :) you gotta teeter before you can learn to sashay.

[Michael G.]

It isn't so much what you wear. It's when and how you wear it. And if it suits your mood, then who could ever disagree.
As for me. If the heels make you feel good about yourself, great. Like Sheila says, add stockings... wonderful, if it makes you feel great, too.
I'll take the sparkle from the eyes that says, "I'm ready for bare skin. And maybe breakfast in the morning."

[LA Lorena]

well, that's all well and good if you have eyes to sparkle at you. :)

[Michael G.]

(smiling... yes, it is, isn't it.)

[LA Lorena]

from what I remember, yes

[C.R.Turner]

I can't understand the attraction for a woman to wear heels to be honest. To me, they look ungainly, awkward and uncomfortable. Now, couple that with the fact that some women spend 000's on these tiny pieces of dead animal skin (sorry!), and I'm even more baffled!

But you know, if it brings a smile to you, LA, then it's almost worth it. But me, I get my kicks for free! (usually from women wearing said heels! :D )

[LA Lorena]

And here I wrote this hoping to help you understand. This came about because of the conversation we had the other day. Is there no hope that you shall ever understand me CR? ;)

[Verser]

Oh, I love this little poem. It has a sashay to it, a couple of inviting images, a little word play, and an end that is suggestive, playful, fun. It is you!

Can I use it?

[LA Lorena]

It's all yours, provided that the shoe fits....;)

[Verser]

Like a glove!

[Tate Morgan]

This is precious I can think of many women who over the years would tell me I hate these damn heels !!LOL But to your defense you are an extremely handsome woman And I doubt any man would not turn his head as you passed.

[LA Lorena]

thanks tate. this was actually just a silly thought that came to me after a conversation I had with a friend.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, how I love to wear high heels! Your write captures the reasons why!!
Do I have a better way of reminding you.....well, maybe a pair of high heels with some nice silk stockings.....lol

[LA Lorena]

perfect Sheila!