The I's Have It

I will

 

I do

 

I did

 

I can't

 

I don't

 

I want half, and joint custody

 

I am

Reviews

[Phillitup]

So much power in little words...poem full of them has more meaning and thought-provoking abilities then a philosophy book. So true...nicely penned. I love this poem by the way. The flow is nice, the words logical. I feel like I should be drinking tea and wrapped in a blanket as I sit here reading tonight (not something I often do). Where I just read (mainly stories and poetry. I love this!

-Dell

[LA Lorena]

thanks for stopping by, and for the review. nice to meet you.

[Phillitup]

and to you!

[DrD]

My women never say "I don't." You have to change that part.

Other than that, I really liked this.

[LA Lorena]

Even when the duct tape is removed? ;)

thanks for dropping by DrD. it's always a pleasure.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good idea, I understand this to be a sharp look at marriage. As the old joke goes marriage is a institution, and who wants to live in a institution?...

[Distant horizons]

I read

I laughed

I liked :-)

[MOON]

Clever write , message came through perfectly , short and sharp!

[Joel M Frye]

I read

I hurt

I chuckled

You are.

[Frieda P]

I never...saw something like this before. Very clever, short and got your message across loud and clear. Nice.

[LA Lorena]

thanks frieda.

[writing mojo]

did you mean to make the piece form look like an upside down cross, or was it just vows in portrait and religion of your expressive I gazing nature?.....great powerful stuff these words, i am amazed at where they made impact..

[LA Lorena]

I could lie and tell you how clever I was, that yes, I intended the inverted cross, but it was just a lucky by-product of the write and my thoughts, and coincidental, or perhaps it was just fate?

[writing mojo]

fate works for me...

[LA Lorena]

it was a strange write for me....usually I write with pen and paper, this I did as a direct add in about 2 minutes. I think it literally just fell out.

[writing mojo]

well it shows yet another different side to your writing upside down

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts and the purpose of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[LA Lorena]

thank you Coyote. always a pleasure to see you!

[Tasha]

Wow L.A. I loved this, it left a little mystery as well. All in all great job!

[LA Lorena]

thank you tasha

[Tasha]

you're welcome