The I's Have It

I will

 

I do

 

I did

 

I can't

 

I don't

 

I want half, and joint custody

 

I am

Reviews

[Phillitup]

So much power in little words...poem full of them has more meaning and thought-provoking abilities then a philosophy book. So true...nicely penned. I love this poem by the way. The flow is nice, the words logical. I feel like I should be drinking tea and wrapped in a blanket as I sit here reading tonight (not something I often do). Where I just read (mainly stories and poetry. I love this!

-Dell

[LA Lorena]

thanks for stopping by, and for the review. nice to meet you.

[Phillitup]

and to you!

[AYVID N]

There were two negatives in the poem. Symbolizing where the break-up begins. I guess its the progression of the marriage and its end. 'I am' is the blissful freedom every woman utimately dreams of.

[FJ Davis]

You certainly is, dog girl.
Juggle any German Shepherds lately? No?--only those little rat dogs.
Whimp!

[LA Lorena]

Are you forgetting I now have an Australian Shepherd too? 55 lbs of greased lightening and attitude!

[C.R.Turner]

I see.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Like this little rant. Why are we getting it in the neck recently, what have we done?
Would swap round the 'I do' and the 'I am'

[KAOlmsted]

I...agree.

[quinfinn]

roar! hell hath no fury as a woman scorned!

[CS]

I love it. The two most important words in the English language: I AM.

[Sheila Kline]

Very clever!! So much happens after the "I do"! -I would, I could, I should....makes me think of other "I's"! My favorite is, "I will survive"!

[Dr. Wood ?]

WHOOSH......Its almost as if it never happened......Great poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well that sums up the miracle of marriage, LOL