The I's Have It

I will

 

I do

 

I did

 

I can't

 

I don't

 

I want half, and joint custody

 

I am

Reviews

[Phillitup]

So much power in little words...poem full of them has more meaning and thought-provoking abilities then a philosophy book. So true...nicely penned. I love this poem by the way. The flow is nice, the words logical. I feel like I should be drinking tea and wrapped in a blanket as I sit here reading tonight (not something I often do). Where I just read (mainly stories and poetry. I love this!

-Dell

[LA Lorena]

thanks for stopping by, and for the review. nice to meet you.

[Phillitup]

and to you!

[Relic]

I'm not married so I'm afraid to get married now. haha You speak for so many. Marriage seems to be a risky sport from what I've seen in the past. Maybe someday for me, maybe not. Good one.

[Annabelle Lee]

Everyone says the right think to say is you
Are you
Have you
Can you
Let me get that for you
But those peiple that do say I I I and Me Me Me seem to be doing so much better

[Tree]

Creative. It is amazing how clear your message illuminates with just these few words. 18 words to sum up an important part of your life... And where you've been. Remarkable piece, LA

[Michael G.]

Been there, and done that... I think? Nope, I'm sure... I did.
Fun!

[Aidz]

so half a dog? ;)

I see
I read
I thunk

[LA Lorena]

LOL. I like your new avatar BTW!

[Ken Simm.]

I am impressed. So much was said that was not said.

[LA Lorena]

Thanks Ken. Not sure where this poem came from, but I will take it.

[KeeD]

Summed up the entire relationship from start to scratch.. cause now it's finished. It might have taken a life span but it felt like a blink of an eye.. the emotions changed over night and now i'm left wondering was it worth it? I don't even Know if "I" should ever recite another "I" again.
Well LA, No I's from me, but I'll give you this. "You" are legend

[LA Lorena]

aww, maybe in my own mind, but thank you all the same sweetie! xx

[SkinlessFrank]

I want to know how you did it

[LA Lorena]

LOL! What exactly does "IT" refer to?

[SkinlessFrank]

all those "I's" thread together so perfectly like beads on a string.

[LA Lorena]

thanks. If |I knew, I'd be penning furiously now, and posting more than I do. This one just wrote itself I'm afraid. I wanted to write something that left much more to the reader's imagination, let them fill in the spaces between the lines, and that said a lot with few words.

[Dream Mistress]

:) amazing

[LA Lorena]

thanks for reading.

[Dream Mistress]

your welcome