I love this...not much else to say. I just seriously love the--and you will forgive the pun--flow of this piece. I'm not a man, so I have no idea what an actual wank session feels like (I can't believe I just said "wank session" in a review; especially a review of such a beautiful piece) but I do know what it's like to squeeze those drops of black pearls onto the page, and I imagine the release is just as sweet...The comparison is brilliant...and that question at the end; I've wondered that a few times, myself, but I'm usually way off base *laugh* Just another narcissist living in her own head ;-) But this is an extraordinary write, LA, seriously. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
-kimmer
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
LMAO! I can't believe that someone wrote "WANK SESSION" in a review of my work either! LOLOLOL. Us.. read moreLMAO! I can't believe that someone wrote "WANK SESSION" in a review of my work either! LOLOLOL. Usually get those comments in my inbox. ;)
Thank you for the nice words Kimmer, glad you found it worthy. I do like to try to experiment with my writing and always enjoy surprising my readers with something unexpected.
Well, Lorena,
If he writes anything like this, I'd not be a bit surprised to know he must be thinking of You, while he's at it, that is. ; )
Lovely and crafty innuendos thread so creatively all through this piece from your fertile imagination, Lorena … and, what's not to love about that, especially when one admires and worships excellent writing.
A bushel basket of thanks for the sheer joy of sharing with you! ⁓ Richard
Oddly, my fingers are calloused and work-weary …
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This is the first poem I have read of yours and my oh my did I choose a good one :)
I guess it is true what they say, poetry is open to interpretation and it seems we all are thinking quite alike....Kimmer summed it up, need I say more, LOL.
Aha, wondering if possibly you could be the center of someone's creative world. Always, but then I realize that I'm only Annabelle and they needn't be paying enough attention to me for that to even be possible, lol bravo, Lorena
Every great poet or writer always needs a true source of inspiration. If it's coming from a beautiful and talented woman (such as yourself) how can you go wrong with that. Great poem. An enjoyable and intriguing read. :)
Thanks for the read and the refreshingly candid review. l.. read moreS**t! You mean I'm not? ;)
Thanks for the read and the refreshingly candid review. loved it!
11 Years Ago
No, I've been called that. You proved them wrong. Doesn't exactly work in my favor though.
11 Years Ago
Well then, time for you to prove them wrong yourself then, isn't it? Poetry need not be dull and st.. read moreWell then, time for you to prove them wrong yourself then, isn't it? Poetry need not be dull and stodgey, or sexless and nerdy. Go on, dive in to the deep end and live a little! :D
Every line is a breath of ultimate beauty; tender and intimate. What secrets you release in every lingering letter. He would be a fool not to think of you every waking moment. You are nirvana.
A great analogy. Really dug this poem, and it's rhythms and innuendo. In a good piece whether it's a novel or a poem the reader will find a way to squeeze themselves between the words. Well done, poetess.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Diego. This one was written as an experiment, leaving the safety net of my rhyme, rythym and .. read moreThanks Diego. This one was written as an experiment, leaving the safety net of my rhyme, rythym and flow style, and grabbing hold of something completely different and out of the box. I'm very much enjoying expressing myself in this new way, and am getting comfortable in this skin.
Hello, I'm known as LA or LL. I am a bit of an enigma, but I like it that way. I'm on a bit of a hiatus from the site for now, as life has gotten a little busy, but I shall return.
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