Sunny Hues and Chocolate Blues

It shines bright like a spotlight
Engulfing the stream
Reminding all
Nothing is unseen
For a crazy minute a smile infects
And the grammatical errors are checked

Enbark on a journey through silent streets
With sunny hues and chocolate blues
How wonderful and exhilirating!
A strange mood as approximating
Close to happiness though not quite
For such a road is a constant endeavour
A never ending ride
Minds co-encide
To an infamous plot

Just let it rot out into the open
Don't go it alone
Don't want to feel or care or hold the phone
Leave it with the sunny hues and chocolate blues
To climb the sky on a thunderous ladder
Above and beyond
To forget everything and everyone

Author's Note

Not that great. Trying to get back in to the swing of things.

Reviews

[JayJayBlue]

Great work I especially loved the last stanza

Leave it with the sunny hues and chocolate blues
To climb the sky on a thunderous ladder
Above and beyond
To forget everything and everyone

Keep it up :)

[L4rn13]

Thank you :)

[melissa]

Great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[L4rn13]

Many thanks. I will send some requests for my old work too.

[melissa]

OK your welcome

[Simon Welsh]

I love how your writing is progressing. Keep it up!

[L4rn13]

Thank you. Glad you can see the progression.

[Marcus]

This is good, I enjoyed reading. Keep it up!

[L4rn13]

Thanks :) glad you enjoyed it haha