Liminal Faces

Waterfalls so crushing and vast like the lucid blue daydream of nights once past
Stereotypical monuments of the ice-bleached sky reveals no obnoxtious sentiment just benevolence and wonder
Vividity as such compliments snow-filled winter gateways and bestow an archaic, resplendent world only the naked soul can upon these ruined eyes
Partake such a celestial dance and expose the ocean as the real world bellows this return again

Reviews

[Justin]

You have such a way with words. You know how to use the right words without making them sound forced. Amazed!

[Simon Welsh]

Lots of imagery going here. I'd say structure it better; otherwise it's awesome.

[L4rn13]

I wrote it out like that on purpose as part of the message. Maybe its too much.

[A. Amos]

Lot of work going on in this piece and enjoyed the end with great message, great write my friend

[L4rn13]

I think I may have used too much.