Collision Asunder

I'll go unnoticed
Go unnoticed
Hear the sound of a whimpering dame
I haven't the time for petty games
Back for your heart and the smashed pieces again

I'll go unnoticed
Go unnoticed
I shant wish good luck
Or its another dumb f**k
Gone without a trace

You will go unnoticed
Leave unnoticed
No comfort from me
For now you see
I don't care
Growling within cause you to run
Run and ne'er set your foot here

You're unnoticed
Ever unnoticed
Hostility resides in me
Lest happiness comes from my key
Nothing more to come of this

Left unnoticed
Remain unnoticed
I have found such worth
Not from your turf
Solid concentration
But from the soul
The greatest teacher of old
So long to the one unnoticed...

Reviews

[Blue]

This sounds like a song. I can feel the beat and the melody. The division of lines has a very good effect in portraying the message. Well penned.

[Simon Welsh]

Story of my Goddamn life. I know how you feel. Nicely written.