Feel Nothing. Say Nothing.

Expressive writing from what was once a loveable heart.

Forget all your hope and bask in the pain
For darkness has befallen again.
It has taken over and disembowelled the soul,
continues to swallow whole.
Force me to fight within this gladiator arena
Against demons and creatures of fanfiction.
The bats fly low spewing pink vomit
And the harpies harken in the summit.
Lets revel in this sad lonely cage,
Before they come and tear our limbs off again
For there is nothing left...
They make you believe there is nothing to fight for,
But I'll sit in my corner and wait
Because I care no longer and with glazed eyes
I'll laugh as everything falls.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so vivid.Your images leaping of the page.When things look hopeless still fight and never back down.Well this is what my mind told me when I read this .It is excellent:)

[L4rn13]

Thank you for your review :) Yes this is what I wanted the reader to get from this. In a lot of situations we will want to give up but how long before we lose it and just don't care anymore? I wanted the reader to ponder on it. Thank you for your kind words ^-^

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome:)

[Simon Welsh]

Love that last line. Beautiful as ever.