Yellow Eyed Survaillance...

Dream: you play a game to complete and you have three chances otherwise if you lose them you disappear. There are people with eyes that shine yellowish orange who will make you stick to those rules...

Have you ever wondered the scary phenomenon of a liminal place?
Not knowing where you're going or when you'll be back to your personal space?
What if I told you there were bewildering realms beside ours,
A concoction of colour in one, multiple shades of dreary distortion in others,
Or another where games rule your hours?
Gaming consoles that torment the eyes
Leaving you confused to the perversion taking over the skies
Be gone from this place for only three remain!
Three strikes is all it takes.
For in this game nothing is slain
Break the rules once...twice...but not thrice!
Gulp down their intoxicating solution
Carbonated soda and sulphuric nitrogen
That's it! It's done! They're coming!
Remember who is their target...
For I'd hate to be the one to mark it
Their brown eyes change to the haze of bright yellow
Almost, the bestow of a circular bright, halo
Till the face contorted to a demonic snarl
Save lest the beast escape the flesh prison and prowel.
The twisted, unstable psych of a female
Would take you to such a place so cruel.
The escape of gaming becomes the prison
And all you know, whom you know, the unison
Within a van faded
No noise heard but your heart left jaded
Because you're on your own
Each and everyone of those eyes watching...
Observing as your name is the last one listed
No escape a severe debauchery of the mind contorted and twisted...

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. I used the style of a story for my poem so i could describe the dream without making it seem like there is too much.

Thanks for reading :)

Reviews

[Justsimplyjulia]

thank you so much for submitting to my contest! I very much enjoyed this read!!!
unfortunately I can only have one winner so.....
thanks for entering!!!
Keep up the fabulous work!
-Dragon

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

A very beautiful piece and fully unfolded story which really is a great talent in you.

[Simon Welsh]

Oh, I love this! Love the use of colour; really makes this one stand out.