Poem from a Poet...

To be and see the beauty of Poetry...

I shan't befuddle your mind
With poems of vampires
Or quadruple signs,
But rather rhythmful beats.
For I am a poet
And express through torn seams
The stories of the heart,
Through tube like strings.
No better way to display
Could say the style is rash
Too fast and upbeat,
Protruding inspiration in one smash.
So take what you think
But that is my persona
Confusing but amusing,
A discombobulated order...

Author's Note

Wondered what you all would think of this as it had been in my description for a while.
Please leave any feedback.
Thank you :)

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I can sense your "voice" in your style of writing and I say I'm impressed. :)

[Lexi Villanueva]

So much imagery i can see in here. It brings out the story within the poem. I
will be truthful i enjoyed this poem a lot so for my rating it will be a 98 but its
great i love it like the last part of this poem is like imsipring in a sort of way.

[burnhouse]

Says much. Wonderful poem and description of you in one. :)

[eglantine]

Cute way to introduce yourself. Only suggestion: take out "even" in the last line.

[L4rn13]

I thought it seemed a bit strange with 'even' at the beginning. Thank you :D

[Simon Welsh]

We're all insane here ;) nice poem.

[eglantine]

“I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.” ― Edgar Allan Poe

[L4rn13]

That is a beautiful quote :)