What you are to Me

Any chance I get...I'll hold you close...

Up the firefly path
You lead me full of promise
My warm heart you have,
We will fly honest.
Surrounded by bug-like stars
You're kindness worth more than gold
Who would have thought this would be ours?
Its your eyes for they have me sold.
You are like my haven
We could stay like this forever
All you are I can't stop craving,
And yet I know however.
Forever is a very long time
So lets savor,
This starry mist sublime.
No words will press through my lips
To tell the emotions within
Into your soul my mind dips
Pray tell is it a sin?
For I shan't avert my gaze
Your masculinity completes me
Shrouded in this twinkling haze,
My heart beats for you...you see...

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

bug-like stars

I'd like to see that. Haha. :) Sweet and sincere poem.

[RainDancer1997]

This a very nice poem:-) love is beautiful when its true. Great job!

[burnhouse]

I like how it somehow calmed me. Pretty one. :)

[eglantine]

Hm, I feel that in order to fully appreciate this poem I'd have to hear you read it, or speak it, like in your about section: "rhythmful beats." Have you checked out the beat poet generation? I think you'd like them.

[L4rn13]

Yes the enjoyment is particularly through reading out loud :)
I shall be sure to look them up :) Thank you for reading

[Simon Welsh]

Two hearts can make a whole. Nice.

[L4rn13]

Thanks for reading ^-^