All is fair

All is fair

A Poem by Kimi
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Have you ever heard all is fair in love and war?

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All is fair when
bodies hit the floor
When blood spills
on this battlefield

I don't care who you are
what you do
how you live
how you think it is wrong
what you hate and love.

All is fair when
I shoot you down
when blood spills
and tears fall
where a family prays
and when a wife cries

All is fair in love and war
as long as I live.

© 2013 Kimi


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:( dark... (I'm for love and peace! that hippie thing!) but very well writen!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. I don't honestly know how to feel with this one. Is the person saying this seriously or sarcastically. It kind of takes the saying to the extreme. Anyway I liked it, though watch for grammar mistakes. your "I's" are lower cased.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess the winning is in the surviving. Thanks for the read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Love animals and myths i;m kinda dark. write small stories by whatever i'm feeling that day i like to keep it short i sometimes make song lyrics about what i feel. Kimi is my real name even if i hate.. more..

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