Seeker of truth

'm the seeker of truth 
I'm interested to know 
What is truth and where it is 
if i tell people get mad

they hate the truth

even if it sets them free
they lie to everyone of
who they are what they do
how they act
i find these lies i spill
them for what they are a monster

hiding in human skin

Deep inside they don't know how to act
when it resurfaces so they hate
the person who told

everyone lies so are we all monsters hiding

so i am the seeker of truth
i expose their lies
for what they are
have you told a lie today
even i had but mine no one knows but
me the seeker of truth.

Author's Note

Be nice tell how i can improve.

Reviews

[Eryn ♪]

I like this, and the whole message behind it. It is hard to say how to improve poetry because it is all relative to the writer, from the way the sentences are broken up to the words you use. I found it a little difficult to follow at first, but the later half of it was fine. Good Job.

[angelina neves]

Beautiful! :)
I'm a seeker of truth too
and when i was young i was sure all "grown up" were cynical and afraid of each other and of each other would say about them... so they lie to each other... anyway, today i think that lies are another way to say a truth... shows how weak this people are... something like that!