Memories Of An Imperfect Angel

How a lot could be forgone just to make things up and though it failed the memoirs never faded.

All I had to hold My World in one piece was revolving around you, and you know it. And you being the only one I always run to in my tears.I thought we did fight the world together.I always thought having you was enough to keep me alive ,when I realized that life wasn't getting any better. I had to start Living off the Grid, but the Walls off the Grid are the Coldest you can imagine. So Lifeless that day and night passed, but to me it was like the World stood Still.Now tell me if Love was a slippery deceitful word,then what was the most Intimate thing we could say to those we hold Most Dear?I was so dumb to have believed all of this.If I was sensitive enough,I did see the waves coming towards me. I didn't mind the cost of the challenges but all of your pictures that are poisoned with hates and all the flashes of your awful deeds across my mind are all MEMORIES OF AN IMPERFECT ANGEL.

Reviews

[paparapapa]

Aaaw. This one really tugged my heart. I had to read it twice just so that I can digest internally the emotions that you have showered through this write. However, I don't know if this can be considered a poem. Maybe a letter? Well, anyway, the pure bitterness and regret that you are feeling are clearly conveyed to the readers. Just edit it a little more though. I think it lacks punctuation marks at some points. Nevertheless, this was really good. Thanks for sharing.

I loved this part even if it's kind of confusing...
"all I had to hold my world in one piece was revolving around you..."

[Paige H]

The ending was very emphatic and I enjoyed it greatly. The style, though one I am unaccustomed to, rolled off of my tongue quite well. This was nice to read.

[Renny]

More reviews please, thanks.

[MS. BABy]

wonderful feeling

[WindSong]

Thank you for sharing your most inner most feelings and thoughts about the agony of love! Beautifully written!

WindSong

[LunarSong]

nice

[RainQueen]

Heartwrenching goodbye. Your stream of consciousness presentation traces the burning trail of tears as your soul is poured out on paper. It takes courage to live that pain, embrace it. I think you have, and with a passion that fortells healing.

Outstanding.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life teaches us to appreciate the good moments. In the poem. You went to good time and bad. Memories are our teachers to be kinder. With age we learn love need to be slow and easy. I like the way you ended the poem. Most of us are imperfect and need forgiving eyes for our weaknesses. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote