Awake...

Dreaming of a better world.

I had this dream of unimaginable feelings.

Like love and lust in my dream-state convening.

In such a way as to not seem demeaning.

And night after night I contemplate its meaning.

This dream, I do believe, mirrors on reality.

Lost in a fantasy of unbarred sensuality.

Unable to describe such a perfect duality.

In trying, mind's dying, from an obessive mentality.

A immaterial world of perfection created.

The sense of thyself and of spirit inflated.

Emotions increased in kind unabated.

My world of you lay undesecrated.

I hate the world while I'm awake.

A soul for sleep?.. a deal I'd take.

It may sound crazy, for goodness sakes.

I hope tonight I do not wake...

 

Good Night...

Reviews

This is so deep, to your heart, and love the rhyme cadence. It could be a rap, or song... Your work reads familiar, as I don't know sure why... very good.

[Kyrosutra]

Too Right Brother :D

[Geoff Hubbard]

wow. incredible poem. i can relate completely. all you want to do is sleep because the only place you can be with her is in your dreams. This brings back sad memories.