I wasnt ready

He took the thing, the one thing
i wanted to keep for myself
the one thing i wasnt ready to
hand out freely to him
He took it all in an hour,
left me feeling bad,
dirty, used, cheap, and empty
I wasnt ready to give him
all that i had.
I wasnt ready

Author's Note

One of my shorter ones and not very good

Reviews

[HisDark Angel4ever<3]

I can feel the emotion..Very powerful and alot of people can relate to this..very good..

[Kaelyn Shea]

Thank you

[typingaway]

This is really powerful, which makes it good, by the words you have used, make people sympathize, whereas I can empathize, you've done a great job here, well done!!

[Kaelyn Shea]

Sadly this is a true story.

[Ronni]

Powerful, I can feel the emotion through your words. Good Job!