dying

im dying here

im fading fast

but im not going

to let them see

me break down

and never come back

im not going to

let them see

my pain and

my fear

i will just let my wrists see it

the blood is flowing 

fast and warm and red

i cant stop it

it wont stop coming

its starting to go dark

whats happening

im dying

and fading even faster

no one is here

theyll find me later

and laugh at the sight

they always said

i should end this life.....

.... help me

Reviews

[Jon]

This is really sad, death is allways something that should be avoided at all cost. Nate you say death reaches out to you, sadly enough Ive been there when I was growing up. Thought life was a worthless journey were I seemed to be stuck. It might not seem like it now, but one day you'll be able to see that theres so much more to life, you'll have good relationships and bad ones, but no matter the outcome allways stay hopefull cause you never know when the right one will come around;) Anyways good write Kaelyn, not the easyest thing to write about.

[Nathan Durham]

This really spoke to me. The topic of death in any form reaches out to me. Well worded and smooth flowing. This was a great write.