crash and burn

i am afraid 

im gonna crash

and nones gonna be there

to help me 

when i fall on my face

i am afraid

im gonna burn

and what they said 

will all be true

and i really am the devil

i am afraid

and i want a wish

just one wish just for now

to help me 

when i fall on my face

i am afraid

and theres no shooting stars

so i have to pretend i saw one

to tell me they were wrong

and im a good child

... but im not

Reviews

[Brandon]

i will never let you fall but if you do i'll catch you!!!!!!!!

[Dev]

This is really very sad.. I like it very much..
I just want you to do some edits on it..

I am afraid
I'm going to crash
and no ones going to be there
to help me
when I fall on my face


I am afraid
I'm going to burn
and what they said
will all be true
and I really am the devil


I am afraid
and I want a wish
just one wish just for now
to help me
when I fall on my face


I am afraid
and there are no shooting stars
but I have to pretend I saw one
to tell me they were wrong
and I'm a good child




... but I'm not


JUST a few minor details.. Other than that.. AMZING love it

[Krista]

Kaelyn, this is wonderful. Like most of your writing I can relate to it. You won't fall in my opinion. You are a great person and very kind hearted.

[chaotic katie]

i like this very much repeating words always brings more dramatic effect, great write

[Johnny Westbrook]

you won't fall because i been high in the sky, so i can fly and catch you :)
you won't burn because i been through hell and know the paths to walk :)
you won't need a shooting star if you have a glimpse of light in your eyes.
you will be okay because you have a friend like me :p

[Carmen Garcia]

this is so sad.!! u make me cry.! :( i'm always here for u as ur friend and lil sis. i hope u always remember that.!

[Kaelyn Shea]

awww cody your soo sweet! i ll be lookin for you when i do

[Cody Wiggins]

It was good and ill be there to catch you before you hit the ground

[Nathan Durham]

This was very deep. It had a lot of powerful feeling in it. It flowed very well. Good job on this.

[Kaelyn Shea]

i dont know if im going to be or not...