Impotant to me

written by my friend made me cry

you're more important than you could ever know.

you make the sun rise every morning i wake. 

you make the toast taste good when im running late. 

you make my mind work to create the greatest songs.

your love flows through me like a river all day long

Reviews

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

amazing words kaelyn, powerful with its own meaning. whoever your friend is, knows his way around the heart

[Kyla Keltner]

who is this by?

[clauds294]

This is really good! Youve got awesome friends :)

[Kaelyn Shea]

lol this wasnt written by me it was written by my friend he is always there and he says he cant live with out me but i think its the other way aorund i dont think i could live with out him

[Nathan Durham]

I really liked this. It reminded me of the way I felt for my ex. Very powerful emotion and nice choice of words. Keep making awesome poems.

[MissWordSmith]

"you make the toast taste good when im running late."
I just loved this. It wasn't profound or oh-so-wonderful, but it was beautiful in its own way.
great write Kaelyn :)

[Kaelyn Shea]

im sure he would love to here that

[Levioshock]

amazing