the gun

shawn i hope some of the dialoge sounds familiar. you kind insprired this

i said i hate my life

he said i think you should end it

i nodded and picked up a gun

i watched as his eyes widened

I was only joking he says frantically

i shake my head 

no you werent you want me gone

he trys to take the gun from me

i jump away and pull on the triger

NO! i heard you shout form be hind me

you grab the gun and throw it into the fire

no! damn it! i wont lose another! 

i begin to cry

I just ruin everything for you

your pain is all my fualt!

im so sorry!

you pull me to you but i struggle

no! i wont lose you! 

you dont need me! you dont! i promise 

you shake your head and begin to cry

dont leave me love

dont leave me.....

Reviews

[Kaelyn Shea]

aHHH!!! SKYLAR!!!! lol

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

umm whoa. please dont call my love a b***h w***e ok?

[Kyla Keltner]

Uhm, excuse me you little b***h w***e, I NEED YOU!! Don't you even dare say no one needs you, ccause it's a BIG FAT LOAD OF DONKEY S**T. [:

[Nathan Durham]

This was very powerful. Words can be weapons or miracles depending on who speaks them and who hears them.

[A.Lee]

Well written. Only sad that you feel that way. But people often regret the things they say when they realize how big of an impact it has on the person they said it too. A misspoken word can mean life or death in some cases.

[chaotic katie]

the emotion and feeling in it is very strong and it always makes a great peice of writing

[Kaelyn Shea]

no one needs me

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

very deep, compelling, & so very true that i love you & need you