the gun

shawn i hope some of the dialoge sounds familiar. you kind insprired this

i said i hate my life

he said i think you should end it

i nodded and picked up a gun

i watched as his eyes widened

I was only joking he says frantically

i shake my head 

no you werent you want me gone

he trys to take the gun from me

i jump away and pull on the triger

NO! i heard you shout form be hind me

you grab the gun and throw it into the fire

no! damn it! i wont lose another! 

i begin to cry

I just ruin everything for you

your pain is all my fualt!

im so sorry!

you pull me to you but i struggle

no! i wont lose you! 

you dont need me! you dont! i promise 

you shake your head and begin to cry

dont leave me love

dont leave me.....

Reviews

[deeps]

This is so sad.

[Rawr!!XD]

this is so sad...and its beautiful in its own sad way too....nice work

[TheKaylaPup]

beautifully sad. nicely done.

[Kaelyn Shea]

all thanx to john and shawn

[X]

a few grammatical errors in here but not too shabby.

[zappy]

very sad poem i like

[Kaelyn Shea]

two of my guy friends inspired it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Sad poem.....

[Kaelyn Shea]

OMG! thats awsome! lol

[Kyla Keltner]

It was like 2 in the morning. her and her brother were at my house, he was half a sleep and then BAMMMM! Duck fart. I laughed until i pissed my pants. I was on the phone with my brotherrrr!