The path

Im on a path that could kill me

im fadin fast and noone is here to save me

i hurt so many and broke myself

everything i did i tried to do for you

but i just ruined it 

im so sorry

please forgive me

ill take this gun and take my life

away to try and help you

i do this all out of love

and they told me before

no one would care if you were gone

Reviews

[Nathan Durham]

Very powerful. This had a nice flow to it and the words conveyed good emotion. This was a very good write.