you

for a guy but he may take it the wrong way. i hope he recognizes his words :I

you said you loved me

told me to dream about you

you said you would pick me up

told me to look for you

you told me i was sexy 

i said it was a lie

you said i was beautiful

i started to cry

Reviews

[melancholia skies]

My favorite part of the poem was the last four lines out of the eight. I liked how it felt you looked beyond being called "sexy" but definitely took the compliment when you were called beautiful. It brought a smile to my face. The first four lines were nice too. Not a lot of rhyme, but still, it flowed rather nicely. Great job, Kaelyn. : ). I'd give it 10/10.