you

you

A Poem by Kaelyn Shea
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for a guy but he may take it the wrong way. i hope he recognizes his words :I

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you said you loved me
told me to dream about you
you said you would pick me up
told me to look for you

you told me i was sexy 
i said it was a lie
you said i was beautiful
i started to cry

© 2010 Kaelyn Shea


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I like this it's short and to the point.
Enjoyable read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sometimes, taking a compliment is like taking a bullet.
[So excuse me for saying: well done. *_~]

Posted 14 Years Ago


fml

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this one. It was short, simple, and to the point. I agree with a previous review, that the last lines were the best.

Posted 14 Years Ago


ok does iny one know who this is for i know joy does it was a good poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Kaelyn Shea
Kaelyn Shea

Little Rock, AR



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