3 words part 1

lost 

broken 

shattered

Reviews

[mrityunjay]

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[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked it. I think it was great. :)

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... brilliant!!! ... for a reader like me ... it's about being lost first ... then being broken ... and then being shattered into a million pieces ... hence this is a powerful arrangement of words and it works! ... shall read part two now ...

[Not A Writer]

Failure and loneliness I am assumming. Lost and broken sum it all, however, shattered did not amp up the feeling to me. Broken is a different word than lost but shattered is almost similiar to broken just to a more extreme word. I enjoyed it and will now read part II. Good job here.