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sharp, stinging, burning

PAIN

smooth, slicing, scars

CUT

red, gushing, fading

BLOOD

mask, fake, lies

HAPPINESS

compassion, love, kindness

RETHINK

support, family, friends

STOP

evil, black, death

THOUGHTS

support, family, friends

CHANGE

darkness, pain, screams

RELAPSE

sympathy, pulling, writing

COMFORT

arms, hugs, love

DIFFERENT

taunting, words, pictures

EMBARRASSMENT

talking, writing, running

CLEAR MIND

smiles, laughing, talking

HAPPINESS

TRUE HAPPINESS

Reviews

[DareToDream]

wow this was geat! it really took me thru the emtions with her, truely beautiful, and I like your writitng style

[MissWordSmith]

loved the feel of a ''journey'' here. great write. i liked the way you repeated support, friends, family in two places, in different ways...
i think my favourite part, besides the end, was...

arms, hugs, love
DIFFERENT

i also loved the simplicity in which you said that laughter was true happiness. a lot of truth in this one.

@ AtticusBlack - sometimes the process of healing, and growing, makes the end result even better, and more appreciated.

@Kaelyn Shea - stay strong, follow your own words ^^^

[AtticusBlack]

It works as a poem... but it's distressing and worrying. I really hope this isn't a full reflection of your life, for your sake. Message me.

[~ Otto Girl ~]

this is a very deep poem you have alot of emotion in this its good. Great work

[Ian]

Really a deep poem turning pain into ones desire that makes you feel that your in control of your own pain. Great job

[Nathan Durham]

I liked it. The words really painted a vivid picture in my head. The style was good, it flowed well all the way throughout.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought it was good. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Daniel Gardner]

This is a quick read poem that makes you think has you go. I like that if you look at it, it can be read as two poems. Great use of words with no repetition.