need a title. any ideas?

need a title. any ideas?

A Poem by Kaelyn Shea
"

written about a week ago

"
i make so many mistakes
but yet you love me anyway
im so afraid for us
that the one big difference is to much
you worry about it all the time
youve told me you do 
you always tell me you love me
and you promise you wont stray
my problem is i worry too much
i fear ill lose you with everypassing day
but i know these fears are 
silly and childish to think about
im gonna be happy and smile when i
think about you everyday
you are my rock my shield, my comfort 
and will always be my boo
so baby even if times get rough 
i know i will always have you

© 2010 Kaelyn Shea


Author's Note

Kaelyn Shea
i worry way too much

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Except for a few absent punctuations, it's a pretty decent poem. This is a rather fragile piece of writing that exudes strong emotions. It makes a very interesting read. And, I think worrying is perfectly normal, it means you care.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww. This is a really sweet poem. Its kinda funny I have worry about the exact same thing with my boyfreind. You sholud definaltely entitle it worry.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It was a good poem. You should call it. "Worry" as you say..
That is what I got it from. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

138 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 2, 2010
Last Updated on April 18, 2010

Author

Kaelyn Shea
Kaelyn Shea

Little Rock, AR



About
Pen Name: Serena Name: Kaelyn Shea Age: 18 Gender: Girl Sexual Orientation: bisexual. Too bad. Relationship status: Taken March 1, 2012 Piercings: Yes, double ear, cartilige, and belly button H.. more..

Writing
I lied I lied

A Story by Kaelyn Shea



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..