Because

Because i love you i will never let you go
Because i love you i just want you to know
That because  i love you you are my one and only
Becuase i love you i would never do anything to hurt you
because i love you i would be with you all that i could
Because i love you i know i should
Because i love you

Reviews

[Brandon]

Nice job on this one. Good piece.

[Kaelyn Shea]

how the heck do i get so many reveiews?! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I LOVE YOU AND YOUVE REALLY HELPED ME!

[Manda]

wow! wonderful job!

[Frantzuu]

Great poem :D

[Kaelyn Shea]

lol this is one of them

[zack]

nice it was good idk if this is the one u told me to read

[AJChallenger]

This is an interesting piece, but it seems to lack form. I would go over it, read aloud and try to edit it some to improve the flow and form.

[Kaelyn Shea]

lol i have lots of good friends and sadly most of them are guys yes but this one was along time ago lol thanx :PP

[Not A Writer]

You did very well for a short love poem and you summed it up quite well. You must have an awesome bf or "friend" but anyways good write and expressing your passions and desire.

[qaralynn]

really sweet..great piece