Lost Love

 

With this broken heart of mine ill try to let go of everything that would make me happy because ill don't want to hurt myself or most of all, anybody.

It hurts me to see people I love to get hurt just because of my stupid mistake(s). Its not that great to have that one your shoulders...but I don't a guily demon or angel on my should. Its just that they will fight and never end it til' I'll end it myself. I want to end the pain so many times....it runs through my head. Im a fallen broken angel. My wings are torn from the battles that I go through. I have scars Ill have forever til' the day I die. The pain that grows in me will keep growing even if I find that special someone...its hurts to trust people even more guys. Im scared theyre going to hurt me again and screw me over like they always so. It just takes one bad apple to spoil the whole bunch. Ive had my share of bad apples..TOO MANY then I would like to have in my life time. It funny becaues I feel a little better when I people around me but I built walls around myself to keep them away. I think that my mind tells me that when im by myself I feel better. I'm not safe by myself...I might do something I might regeat... 

Reviews

[Michael V]

You know you got an excellent start there, I would merely not leave it. The possibilites you could expound on are good, just from that brief glimpse of your feeling you show so much, consider expanding on the "Broken heart of Mine" Dig deeper and show what happen to the pieces of that broken heart or how they each feel....Id have to say you got the emotion and feeling to make this great. So Job Well Done...