No matter what

Flying through the night,

trying to stop the fight.

filling you with fright,

nothing in sight.

 

My wings are dark black.

I'm letting you know now,

that I'm a demon.

so back away!

 

You can see my claws.

you can see my fangs.

I chase after you,

you don't have a chance.

 

I fly off into the night. 

killing left and right.

I fly up high,

staying out of sight.

 

I scare little kids.

I kill everyone.

You better run and hide.

it's just a matter of time.

 

I will catch up to you,

make you feel pain.

you treated me so bad,

but look who is dead.

 

I rip your heart out.

step off in the shadows,

and watch you slowly die.

I smile with joy.

 

I'm a demon now.

killing left and right.

flying through the night,

staying out of sight.

 

It's dark and cold,

I'm all alone.

killing is my joy,

I'm a demon.

 

I lay awake,

its 12 a.m.

all I can think about,

is you!

 

I start to feel something,

deep inside,

I start crying,

and realize I love you.

 

No matter how many I kill,

no matter where I go,

I will always,

always love you!

 

I walk to the church,

ask for forgiveness,

I'm lifted in a ball of light,

then dropped back down.

 

I feel clean,

saved from my sins,

all my scars are gone,

and I have you back

 

Reviews

[Joey Johnson]

Good job.

[Malcolm J. Watt]

This is pretty well written but expresses the hersey of exceptionalism. It's a common delusion. Mercy shown is mercy given is the truth.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[TheLastEclipse]

I enjoy the end. It's getting better :)

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[ALittleBitOfEverything]

I liked it, not my cup of tea and couldnt wrap my head around it, but I liked the darkness to it :)

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[unshakenScene]

i like this

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[MissEpic2902]

I have chills!! I really liked this!!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[MissEpic2902]

No problem!! SOrry it took so long to read it!!

[Zachary_James]

I love this, an excellent write with a twist at the end. Didn't see that coming, while reading this piece i noticed a minor slight error, in the sixth sanza you said " Looked who is dead, when i think you mean " Look"instead of "Looked"

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Forgotten]

A great poem oozing the emotion of forgiveness, it is a hard thing to hurt someone badly then ask for forgiveness because in the real world it's quite often something we just don't get. Great write

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

so sweet and nice asking for forgiveness.
so sweet 100/100

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem