I love you Kevyn

Walking down the street.

seeing familair faces.

'cause in the south

everyone knows each other.

 

You want me to leave.

this little town.

this is all I know.

not big city material.

 

I love you to death.

I'll move with you.

but I'll be a stranger.

I'll stand out like a penguin in Mississippi.

 

I will become part of your family.

I'll leave mine.

Hell they don't care anyway.

so it won't be tough.

 

I'm going to be with you.

if it's the last thing I do.

I'll drive day and night.

if it meant being with you.

 

I'm a Southern Bell.

till the day I die.

but I'm your Southern Bell.

that raises some hell.

 

I want my first marriage,

to be my only marriage.

and with you,

that's what I'll have.

 

I love you Kevyn!

I know you love me too.

and some day,

I'll have a ring on my finger to prove it.

 

Reviews

[Joey Johnson]

This is very sweet , the only thing I noticed that was wrong is when you say southern bell, it should be southern belle.

[Andy]

Very nice, I love how you seem to be longing for love and have your head held high!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Icelanna]

Aw it's so sweet! I can feel the love :) I love the brutal honesty which is directed straight at the man you want! Love it :) x

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Aehr]

Aww... this is so serene, full of pure love!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"I want my first marriage,
to be my only marriage.
and with you,
that's what I'll have. "
A very good ending to a outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[scripted]

Kevyn seems like he could be the one!!! i love the purity of this write, it shows such an honest side to love... thank you for sharing my love yours truely Danielle

[SouthernBelle]

thank you so much

[Tex]

I'll stand out like a penguin in Mississippi.

stand out line right there... great imagery.

Nice write.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you :)