I try and try

I try and try

all the time

but still

I have nothing to show

 

I have no one to love

no grades to show

I have nothing

I am nothing

 

It's so cold

when your alone

it's a long life

when you have nobody

 

I'm alone in the world

no one to hold

nobody that cares

no one around

 

I try my hardest

to be happy

but I can't hold back these tears

any longer

 

These tears are falling

like raindrops

I'm never good enough

never will be

 

I'm just a disappoinment

deserve to be dead

I tied that rope

threw it over the tree limb

 

I put it around my neck 

and stepped of the porch

I hung there dead

my body colder than ice

 

Now I'm buried

six feet under

nobody noticed

nobody cared

 

I looking down

on everyone

watching them laugh

their so happy

 

I hide in the shadows

listen to everything they say

I just died a day ago

and their already making rumors

 

I fly high in the night sky

growing my black wings

planning my revenge

just waiting for the time

 

I'm going to get you

when you least expect it

you better watch your back

because this time I will succeed

 

I tried and tried

all the time

now I'm dead

gone away

 

I tried to kill you

I succeed

your death is a mystery

no one ever found you

 

I took your body

drained your blood

took a rope

and hung you

 

Now you're dead

everyone thinks it is sucide

to bad they don't know

it was me

 

All my life I tried

for the second time

I succeed.........

Reviews

[amarlaksh]

Good one Kymberley!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Joey Johnson]

Made me sad. I don't know if thats a good thing or a bad thing, but good job.

[Jon Settle]

Very touching poem. It was descriptive and very captivating.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Tex]

Wow this is wild... what I ride you took us on. very clever write.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. Hard for people who desire to make other people happy. New world had little concern for what does not profit them. I like the description. Create a sad life with death and suicide as a escape. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thanks but its true... its really how i feel