Part 2- The Story of them

As they watched their parents

be buried dead

they cried and cried

 

They were taken away

to Andrew's house of Hopes

for children

 

They wasted time day after day

waiting for someone to take them

to a better home

 

They bounced from house to house

no one wanted them

just looking for an excuse to leave

 

They grew up

finally moved out

on their own

 

They went to Rebecca's institute of Girl's Socity

and her brother's left in the cold

left to die

 

He found a school

Tibbe Tech

and went and graduated

 

He got his degree for

Nuro-Surgen

and became rich

 

His sister became a

Stripper

and became somewhat rich.

 

They both found love

got married

and had children

 

Now their living

happy ever after

Author's Note

This is part two to She's in love with the boy

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Thanks for sharing. True story?

[SouthernBelle]

no lol the first part is about people in my class and this is just a second part lol

[Levi Levin]

Thanks

[ℰmerald ⚓]

yes! this is fantastic to carry on the story, thank you for writing a part 2. I enjoyed both pieces :)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[ℰmerald ⚓]

your very welcome

[SUGATA M]

Nice read

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[Tex]

Wow you have packed two full lives in one short write! amazing. I liked this story. Almost a poem or at lease prose like. very nice write.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Joey Johnson]

Very interesting, I enjoyed the way you told this story. Good job.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

aw speechless

[SouthernBelle]

i hope thats good then :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

ya its good

[SouthernBelle]

good

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

;-)

[SouthernBelle]

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime a hard life make you stronger. I was tossed around in foster homes. Made me appreciate my home and family. I like the story. A positive ending in a way. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Damien Davison]

Tragic, but the flower seems to grow out of the ice... A happy ending in this one. Thanks for sharing.

[SouthernBelle]

ur welcome thanks for the review