Better off dead

I belong no where in this world

always invisible

better off dead

 

These scars on my arm

slowly bleed

I'm fading away

 

The skies are dark

the ground is soaked in blood

as I slowly die

 

I wake up

it was just a dream

but it felt real

 

I wish it was

no one here cares

I'm better off dead

Reviews

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

there is someone who always care for you but we have to find him up :)
becoming hopeless is not the solution to the problem, be brave and overcome your pain and By the Grace of Almighty everything will be wonderful :)
i know everyone feel just like this but we still have to try
you are successful in telling your feelings :)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you :)

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

mp :)

[Jamestown]

Wow, very deep pain oozing out of this piece! It breaks my heart knowing
you are carrying such a burden, if I could I would take your burden so
you could feel freedom! Everyone has this feeling one time
or another in this crazy life I will pray for you and please
always remember, Jesus loves you so much!!! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Eliza Mae]

So numb, this feeling is contagious - and I feel it flow through each word. So dense with indecision and misperception. We all can relate, relieve, and repair.

Thank you for sharing this - bravo!

[Jon Settle]

I've often times felt like this... I still do quite often, but that doesn't mean we should just lie down and give up. We have to keep going and find a way to get people to care.

[SouthernBelle]

i feel like this alot

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

I understand this feeling...I've been here before. I've had dreams like that and woke up and didn't know quite how to feel. All I wanted to do was sleep it all away and never wake up. It sucks to be alive sometimes when you know you don't want to be...

[SouthernBelle]

excataly

[SouthernBelle]

Everyone is someone. Beautiful write.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Muhammad Qasim]

everyone has a significance for this world .. either small or big so never give up .. ups and downs are part of life

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Muhammad Qasim]

my pleasure

[Sir Jaykom]

Great title tying into this dark and nicely written piece. I like the twist of it being just a dream but no different than reality. Nice last two stanzas.

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us feel the way in the poem. We must find our purpose. Never know what the world need from you. You could save one person or the world. Kind words are hard to find sometimes. I do my best to be quiet if nothing good to say. Just go forward and hope you land in a good spot. A powerful and emotional ride in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Tex]

very nice write. Hopefully this was a meditation and not the way you feel. if it is the way you feel just remember this... You are precious in Gods eyes. so no matter if others do not see the value in you, you can know that if God feels you are precious than one day others will see it to... and even if they don't, You know it is true. The defect is not yours... it is theirs.

Ok ... off my soap box... Good write.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you so much