I'm a demon now

It's deep inside of me

I feel it in my bones

it's ready to escape

it's ready to be known

 

It's dying to be free

this feeling inside of me

I can feel it deep within

it's just beneath my skin

 

I lie awake at night

just trying to stop the fight

it's deep inside of me

it's ready to be free

 

I start to grow wings

there black as the night sky

they take me here and there

they take me everywhere

 

I'm flying through the sky

soaring through the clouds

scaring little kids

giving them nightmares

 

I'm no longer a Saint

I'm a demon from burning hell

the pain they caused

will now be returned

 

I'm watching their every move

they're going to die

they're going to feel pain

I'm haunting them night and day

 

Then you come along

and attack me at my soul

you told me that you loved

but I just let you burn

 

Now you're rising from the ashes

we're both demons now

scaring little kids

giving them nightmares

 

We're causing so much pain

they wish they were dead

we're making hell on earth

it's burning up in flames

 

I can feel it deep in me

it's just beneath the skin

I'm a demon now

and they're laying dead

 

Their body's cold and pale

they're all out of blood

it's puddled on the floor

it's stained on the wall

 

Now the earth is raging

everyone's full of fear

their fighting for their lives

they ain't got a chance

 

I'm a demon now

I'm taking every life

I'm making hell on earth

I'm a demon now

 

Everybody's screaming

children are crying

people are dying

so everyone beware

 

I'm a demon now

killing everyone

flying through the night

drinking people's blood

 

 

Reviews

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

we all are having evil thoughts which come out of the mind when we are hurt by someone and we tolerate it till our patience give up after that we start treating things harsher then before without caring..
poem gives a message about the human nature and i love this one because it is related to my life :)

[M.Babu]

I think we can all relate to the deep scary thought of the deepest evil we hold back, released to the public for all to see. There are always two sides to the edge, it's the balance i think that keeps us sane and amicable. I liked this alot!

good job!

~M.Babu~

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Malcolm J. Watt]

F**k off

[SouthernBelle]

who the hell are you

[Sid]

Dark and disturbing, this is a very well written poem, great albeit gruesome imagery, this sure gives a chill...great write!!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[amarlaksh]

From the first line we can see its written straight from your soul. well done. keep writing

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild tale in the poem. Turning to a demon and torturing the children. I like the description of the turning. Led the reader to a very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Hamza]

it is somewhat a mixture of a demon and a vampire ... but over all too scary and dreadful ...
classy poem :)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

We all have our demons, and sometimes we become those demons. No matter the fight, I'm sure we are able to overcome it. Just takes time and no worries if you become a demon because of it...that way, you can overcome the fight in a different and more creative way than we would be able to before when we weren't that demon or in that dark place.

[Jordan's Back]

Hmm/... Dark, Interesting, I like it :P

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Sir Jaykom]

Not a big fan of dark/morbid kind of poetry, which is the feeling I get from this piece, but I certainly can't disgrace with how well written this is. keep it up! And Thanks for sharing.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you lol i usually dont write like this i just did today for some reason