I'm over you

Listening to all the laughter

I'm about to cry

I've lost all happiness

since I lost you

 

I watched you walk away

I still love you

but you don't care

you never did

 

I gave you my all

but you watched me burn

I burn up in flames

my heart turned black

The sand has ran out

the glass is now empty

I can't just sit and pout

I've cried plenty

 

I'm slowly getting over you

but then you come right back

you gave my number out

so I burned your stuff

 

I'm loving my life

I'm so over you

so take your a*s

and get out of my life

 

 

Reviews

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

It's takes a lot in order to forget someone who we thought was worth everything. Worth trusting. I'm currently going through something like this, it's hard but it's all worth forgetting them in the end. No matter how much they meant to you...once they stop caring, it's always best to let them go. For the better of yourself and well-being.

[Heather]

so sad
you show how strong you are
stay strong and you will get places
this guy is not worth your tears
someone out there is waiting to meet you ( not in the creepy way)
he will never know what he has lost

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime take time to get over someone. One day we find a better purpose or learn we lost very little. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Hamza]

with each stanza that passed, the sad emotion was slowly growing into anger and the last stanza shooed everything with it ..
it is a proverb : "it was essential to hate you, else i would have fallen for you.. "
let it be this way and the phase would pass off quickly .. :)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[emmy bon]

niceeee

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

lol.. love the ending.. good :)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

mp :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. love the last stanza .. nice poem!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Muhammad Qasim]

No problem :)