My dream relationship

I sit alone

and watch the snow

slowly hit the ground

 

It's so cold outside

but warm in here

I waiting

 

Waiting for you to come home

waiting for my baby

to come and warm me up

 

I need my baby

to snuggle with

under a blanket

 

I need my head on your chest

your arms around me

just sitting there

 

Not talking

just laying in slience

completely in love

 

I want to go outside

throw snowballs at you

build a snowman

 

In the spring

I want to lay in a field

full of flowers

 

Look up at the sky

and stare at the clouds

just with you

 

In the summer

I want to sit on the beach

or sit by the pool

 

I want to float in the ocean

and mess with you

just us

 

In the fall

let's walk down streets

covered in leaves

 

Jump on your back

and you carry me

just You and I

 

When we don't feel

like going out

let's stay in

 

I want to be able

to make fun of you

and you just laugh

 

I want to hold your hand

and you not let go

I want to hug you tight

 

When I'm sick

I want you

to take care of me

 

I want you

to not care

about anything but me

 

But most of all

I want you

to Love me for me

 

I want to

be your one and only

forever until the end of time

Reviews

[Heather]

Its a good thing to know what you want
But everyday, although you might not know
You grow into someone that changes what they want in life
Beautifully written

[SouthernBelle]

thank you so much

[MCGFRebelStatus]

Great piece! Straight forward, emotive, sweet, full of sentiment and sincerity. Definitely an expression of soul just what poetry is all about!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[M.Babu]

i like this. direct, emotive , succinct.

~M. Babu~

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash..]

Nic...Reflects to be Positive... ;)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[emmy bon]

beautiful piece, didn't we all need this type of sweet relationship? i bet i personally
need it. well done.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you so much

[Chance]

Well written poem. Glad you are not looking for a bad boy ;o) keep dreaming.

[SouthernBelle]

i hate bad boys

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Hope and dreams are what keep us going. I like the gentle feel and the hope of true love in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you very much

[amarlaksh]

Well You surely have given a good season of love! on a serious note lines were short yet striking the heart. Hail thy love and thy write!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Hamza]

exquisite content ... and over that, it has everything that perfects the word "relationship" ... affection and warmth are oozing and overflowing ..
i would call it "utopian love" ...
but the point is, while everybody's been dreaming like that... you've managed to pen it down in a brilliant manner ...
if only dreams could materialize ...
great work ..

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Faffy]

you can just feel the warmth irradiating from this. it is genuine love this poem and im not going to destroy it with an analysis but just leave it how it was meant to be. i will say this however my favorite lines fave to be

Look up at the sky
and stare at the clouds
just with you

brings back memories =) anyway it was wonderful to read and i hope you find that special someone soon, fantastic job

-Roshan

P.S you may want to change "leafs" to "leaves" but i understand you may have done that to preserve the rhyme

[SouthernBelle]

thank you