A world

Living in a world

full of hate

no love

all guns

 

People laying around

everywhere dead

we need some peace

we need some relieve

 

I have a world

I like to escape to

it's full of love

and full of peace

 

It's dark forest

for me to hide away

and think

to get away

 

It's my sweet escape

no one to bother me

no one to worry

just me

 

It's my place

free to do anything

no parents

no teachers

 

I love that forest

it's my own little place

away from the hate

for me to just walk through the gate

Reviews

[hardscoper6]

Awesome poem, i feel like the best place for me to escape to is a forest, it feels so nice and peaceful, lets me think freely. Good poem! Keep it up!

[TheLastEclipse]

I enjoy the thought but sadly we are so far from that kind of world....
90/100

[SouthernBelle]

yes we deffentily are far away from it

[TheAdamBryant]

cool poem and if i can say , the place for me is my imagination

[Steven Cash]

This would be a nice premise to a horror story

NICE

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[Steven Cash]

np